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DUE Friday
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Austin Flowers
Daryl Baker
12 lines
DUE Friday
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I'm going to stretch your tight little bussy open, boi!!!
Quit duckin the smoke or get a Newport size hollow tip stuck in your throat//
He gets stuck in a zone where all he do is talk about butt fuckin his bros//
Somebody get this uncle ruckus for I boondock him Booty is better than food he fleece johnson//
A can of whoop ass I’m Steve Austin… to fuck hoes you need Austin… your farts stink and your weeds awful//
Daryl….. been giving strawberries to fairies snorting coke off some tranny tits//
His fanny packs full of Xanax and manpons……….. and his mommas got a dick//
You comical as shit swallowing the tip… can you believe that he’s a waiter?//
He could really out diddle the diddler… The bussy king is Daryl baker//
Wet as water… when he fart the jacuzzi with his roomy.. yeah he like that//
Known for kiestering booths… he’ll take you to the studio but don’t ask him where the mic at//
Gay bars… wrote at a gay bar… last night while you was drinkin///
It’s big meech Larry Hoover…. Daryl baker? The lgbtq kingpin//
C. Austin? I don't even see Austin
I'll ring toss him like he's Steve Austin
I'm Gene Autry when the beats droppin'
But you don't got a clue, you sleep walkin'
I'll get this man bounced like a ten count
I've got a tan couch that extends out
He's got has hands out and he's bent down
So there is thin doubt what I intend now
This is a verbal lashing and a literal rape
Not a person rappin' I can't lyrically shake
Tongue stuck on a pole, someone double dog dared him
Like dying mining for COAL, I smothered and I aired him
Vote - Flowers
anticipated this battle. enjoyed reading. AF is funny. liked the opening set up. the Fleece Johnson line LoL’d me. some filler but the high energy & multis carried the verse, keistering booths + closer were aight.
DB has a solid writing style. didn’t like the use of Steve Austin too but didn’t take away from the verse. liked the Gene Autry reference, but the punch didn’t really connect feel like it was just used for rhyme’s sake. would’ve been a haymaker of Autry actually performed the song “Sleep Walker”(Santo & Johnny) but that wasn’t the case. tan couch leant me. lmao.. i loved it for the super multi but it didn’t hit it was just swag. overall aight verse.
AF had a more aggressive approach & a couple genuine lulz references so that pulled the win for me.
good shit gents.
Howl.
M³
I like Daryl’s short lines with strong internal rhymes. I bet if he makes tracks they’re good, these bars had quite a lyrical quality to them.
Flowers had the harder punches. Longer lines but with some internals and decent metre too pull it off without seeming overly wordy.
On balance I’mma vote Flowers, but good shit from both. Keep it up.
Austin is a cheat and knew I was going to use the Steve Austin line. Lol. Jk. Thanks
At least you rhymed. Miracle would have won without rhyming don’t worry.
^ Lol.
Daryl's stuff wasn't bad, but Austin's was just more packed with funny lines, even though I think some of it was a stretch. "Your farts smell and your weed's awful" should've been cut, for instance. It went way over the bar line for no apparent reason.
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