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Fucking 11-10?…. dude gets laid out on his back every time he spars
1 punch n dillys left looking up more then trying to vote on one of sprees bars
i take wifey 2 the movies - get a nice dinner then bust down her throat..
his idea of hanging with the mrs. is going in ‘closed battles’ & reading lines that he wrote
Nicely done by both, the left looking up wordplay was cool & the concept resonated with me as I've done the same recently trying to figure out wtf a pendil was.
Daves hanging with the Mrs wordplay got more of a reaction from me, and although the single-syllable rhyme scheme was a bit slack I think dave did enough to edge it.
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