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    Mooshi

    The Splendor of Yggdrasil

    Pillared beams of sun, burning purgatorial flames
    dance through the bark - he faces this immemorial claim
    eternal recluse; his smile morphs into a vernal salute
    ode to Spring. Mr. Chevalier ties this luring, murmuring noose
    he climbs slowly, then reckons with the length of his rope
    this Last Judgement's fluttering veil...questioning the strength of his hope
    the drifting snow: monochromatic crystals blanketing bliss
    as an earsplitting tempest - shrieks suddenly in this baffling mist
    ...it rises with his breath's imperceptible, gradual hiss.
    Behold! The disquieting splendor of this heavenly aspect
    Portends an unknown. Cosmic malevolence beckoning madness
    ...he leaps, learning the depth of a second's compactness -

    Float.

    He notes each transcendent geometry suspended in space
    as every single belief he ever held commences to break
    the veracious precision of life: immense is its face
    and Jean-Paul Chevalier recognizes - he can amend his mistakes
    sensing Adelaide rocking nearby as she ascends into flakes
    she's swinging softly. A gentle otherworldly pendulum's trace, when suddenly -
    a horde of spirits sinister announce their menacing wake.
    Stretched shadows hum a rising, barren melody great
    the eerie tune blooms - all meaning and mystery bellowing grace...
    a sudden, searing white light.
    The branch breaks! Sprawled, he deals with this murderous pounding
    the vortex of death's gate: he hears its call and its murmurous soundings...
    pulled toward this venerable portal's endless, beckoning call
    he sees the field - charged with an esoteric, blessed morale.
    Adelaide swings...his dead daughter leaves his senses appalled
    her emaciated face rasps a darkened, semi-sentient drawl
    ring-like, she draws near. Panicking, Jean presently crawls
    to the wood's edge. It's somehow...so forged; evanescent, egregious
    these spirits and his daughter gone - the tension increases
    a field of roses! He and Adelaide shared laughs in this sumptuous terra
    its beauty's intensity rises, and he's consumed by an encompassing terror
    memories blend with landscape, and all presumptuous error
    growing at a distance - he sees the pupiled abyss of God's functioning sclera
    this searing light takes him again...witness his climb and ascent
    preacher of madness; creature of habits...mind of a saint.
    Here's the wretched, beautiful view at the height of his zen:
    Wraiths surround him, their socketed eyes ladeling flesh
    Adelaide, smiling wickedly grabs the nape of his neck
    In that terrifying moment...Jean reels during their savage rapport,
    face contorted, she's screaming "I love you Dad" in a roar...
    four of his vertebrae shattered, all of these mighty sentiments reel
    ...and Jean-Paul hangs. Finally finished in this desolate field.

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    Re: Mooshi

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    Last edited by Echelon; April 5th, 2024 at 05:23 AM

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    Re: Mooshi

    Are you on drugs? If so, tell me which ones. They seem fun.
    What is high- My battle loss record & my blood pressure.
    What's not high- my win record or me.

    Enjoy the rest of your day.

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    Re: Mooshi

    read both verses...great vocab...you have a very unique style...i like it
    im not sick...i control the disease
    i got llamas but not the ones that napoleon feeds
    even the most protected soldier can bleed
    me and you ain't nothing alike...we a whole different breed

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    Re: Mooshi

    The guy loves cock though.
    What is high- My battle loss record & my blood pressure.
    What's not high- my win record or me.

    Enjoy the rest of your day.

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    Re: Mooshi

    Done!

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    Re: Mooshi

    Interesting drops
    Both great read
    both flows decent
    Endings nicely done

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