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October 17th, 2018, 01:14 AM
#1
Kool G Rap style verse
I mutilate,
chew the face
off a dude who makes
a move, erase
MC's, reduce a plate
of rappers to human waste
yous a snake
if you debate
who's the great-
-est, Aether illuminates
the game, and thinks at computer pace
felonies accumulate
cause' I shoot the jakes
abuse the cake
till' I hallucinate
pimp out and use a skank
to boost my papes
and all your crews are fake
you got contused and shanked
and all your bitches blew my wank
I slaughter rhymes
burn up the leaf until my hands are cauterized
welded to the blunt,
and you cunts
don't wanna try
me, cause I'm on the kind
of shit that make your momma cry
give you a marijuana high
you can't quantify
my homicides
I wanna see a phat ass steady shakin'
ya petty, base and
ya faggots already makin'
for the exit, when they bring the heavy weight in
that luminiferous flow
makes your ignorance show
dumpin' bodies in any waste bin
till' the feds be chasin'
me, ain't no friendly jakes in
the city I was raised in
my loud rap
knocks the crowd back
I got the sound maxed
if you rap about swag I don't want ya on wax
I shot some rounds at
the last faggot who talked about that
my flows makin'
dough, breakin'
dome plates and
I personally know Satan
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October 17th, 2018, 04:19 AM
#2
Re: Kool G Rap style verse
OK, first and foremost. Your bar structure is really bad. You want to display your bars as you would spit them. The way you formatted it, it has no flow.
Stop trying to just rhyme words just because they rhyme. Think about your life, how you feel. What drives you? I hope its not this.
Just my 2 cents
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btw let satan know i was just looking out
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