A simple lil love poem.

[~Pimpcess~]

This is simple as shit.... but I wrote it about my man...

I love ya so much no one can break our connection,
I love the way you shower me with unlimited affection,
I love how you say that I'm the sparkle in your eye,
I love the fact that I'm with you til the day I die,
I love how my heads high, when I'm by your side,
I love how your my role model, the one I idolise,
I love how you lie awake to watch me sleep at night,
I love how we're so perfect and the feelings so right,
I love how everyday, I see a part of me in you,
I love how I smile inside when you say you love me too,
I love it when your there for me, and got my back, anytime,
But most of all I love the fact your mine, all mine.

It aint really nothin' special it was just how I feel...

~Peace~

[prophiit]

this was like you said simple and sweet........and i'm sad to say a little naive but that is not really important......this wasn't a bad drop......it said what it had to say and went no further than that.....gave me that sappy feeling.....other than that not much to say.........keep doing ya thang

respect..

[Saint Shizzle]

yea simple and sweet.....shows respect and love....i liked the repition u used at the begining...made the piece a lil more interesting

[K-Dubb]

I know I shouldn't be the one saying anything, but I respect that little poem. Reminds me of what I use to say to my gf a while back when we was in love. It meant a lot to me. Good work.

[Mistral]

Yeah this was a good poetry piece, it was worth the read, it was simple but yet it got the point across well, it had a lot of meaning i thought, overall it was a good piece. good work.

[~Pimpcess~]

I'd argue the naive point, I wouldn't say that coz its exactly how I feel about him... but Wow I thought y'all were gonna say it was wack, there some real dope poets on here, thanx 4 the response.

~Peace~

[Smooth JT]

It doesn't even matter how long it was or how simple it is. You got your point out very well. It's harder for some people to express the feelings of love and happiness, but you have done it well. Utmost respect JT.

It's nice to know that are r more guys like me out there that treat women like yourself like princesses. Keep it up peace

[Dadi Kewl]

^hmmmm,
i think he is a she.....

LMAO

[~Pimpcess~]

What u talkin about??

Thanx 4 the props JT..

~Peace~

[Smooth JT]

Addlibb I even said she is a she

It's nice to know that are r more guys like me out there that treat "women like yourself" like princesses

there, lol yea we miss read all the time peace

Welcome Pimpcess, if you don't mind and you have time cheak out my past peices. Tanks Member its all love