thanks for the feed guys, appreciate it
thanks for the feed guys, appreciate it
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Originally Posted by Celph Taut
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ok I love readin stories.
but this piece didnt have any flow.
You had no multis, no internals, and only had end rhymes
which isnt enough to maintain a flow with stretched lines
The content was alright, but could use better structure
hit my story up, tell me what you think
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...023/index.html
alright i can take contstructive criticism
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