Otherwise wasted FL effort. (Defcon1 Diss)

[Intellexual]

Source: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...al-390793.html (Defcon1 vs Intellexual)

Risk consecutive no shows? There's motive to ban these cats;
can't even slap the bitch outta himself, with the hand he packs.
Runnin' scared; clown, you can't [be] mad. Actin' like you're mute,
when I replied, will get the "Fuck!" beat out ya handicaps.
Your exercise, with Futility, bombed. Yet, I'm impressed
(you've resurfaced with the nerve to get your follies wrecked).
Body your text, 'cause I can illustrate blood sports;
Leavin' one con def? An effortless feat for my pungent voice.
IXL. What have you done, before catchin' this L,
being unveiled, then expelled from another board?
Boys to men get clotheslined. This whole time,
you're chippin' off of old blocks, while I'm droppin' gold mines.
Def, couldn't con this one! I'm too evolved and through with ya'll
like condoms deposited (inside of future moms).
Impregnatin' the thought, that you should get lost;
or, get flossed (from out of the mandibles of my ruthless jaws).

Opponent no showed. I'd like to be critiqued in OM, nonetheless.

[country]

well man to be honest
i was let down

the way u go aroundposting n shit i expcted there to be some flawless fuckin phenomenon of a verse when i seen u drop

and it wasnt

im not sayin it was garbage, i jus expected u t be up there further


it was really hard for me to catch the flow wit this, like i spit it aloud in dif styles n i jus culdnt catch it


but

Boys to men get clotheslined. This whole time,
you're chippin' off of old blocks, while I'm droppin' gold mines

thats fuckin raw


wish the whole piece was like that

[Intellexual]

it was really hard for me to catch the flow wit this, like i spit it aloud in dif styles n i jus culdnt catch it

Defcon1 vs Intellexual.mp3 - 1.02MB (Audio Sample)
I couldn't throw anything into it, beyond flowing; my lady is getting her beauty rest.

[sILLable]

i liked it...im not much of a battler but you had some sick punches..nothin completely amazing but nothing shitty...verse was on point....vocab was there..punches didnt fall off..all in all i cant complain...ill verse..keep droppin.~1~

[The Genesis]

I thought this shit was actually pretty decent, it had alot of dope rhymescheme switch ups throughout, some nice multies, I can't really crit too much when it comes to 'net batteling'. I don't really do that, and occassionally when I do it's in a real life format, in which case I would say focus more on funny/personal lines that would get a reaction from the audience.

"Def, couldn't con this one! I'm too evolved and through with ya'll
like condoms deposited (inside of future moms)."

^that was dope, stay droppin.