the world is mine...

[figurative_slanguage]

yo i drop contraversial topics
like NIKE's sweatshop profits
i got more followers than mahommed the prophet
i got this rap game all figured out
people bow down to this shit that comes out my mouth
im like ali, when i rap cuz ull lose the bout
i install fear into my opponets, thats w/o a doubt
im never ending, like a dirty south drought
ill desintagrate your mental state
easily fuck you up while i meditate
ur a bitch ass faggot, but u front as straight
ur girlfriend missed her period, i made her late
i been talkin to ya mom yeee we gotta date
but im on some next level shit
i see you suckin on the devils dick
do i roll strapped? yee i got chrome on the hip
piss me off and ill empty the clip
use it so much ive worn off the pistols grip
everything that u see, shits all mine
discrace my shit and ill rip out ya spine

[Intellexual]

i install fear
It's instill, in case this wasn't a minor typo. Also, it's Muhammad or Mohammed. That latter can still be enunciated to rhyme as intended, though.
discrace my shit
Disgrace; same reason as above.

I like what you're thinking. Some of the punches were too obvious, but this is a strong practice type of piece.

[figurative_slanguage]

yeee

sorry bout the typos

and thanks for the feed

[Esc0BosS]

wtf @ dude pickin out typos???? gtfoh... smh go read a book son

[Intellexual]

wtf @ dude pickin out typos???? gtfoh... smh go read a book son

Relax. My feedback regarded diction, which could be spelling errors. On the off chance that it wasn't just a typo, I still provided the insight. Diction is important, unless you're only rhyming to uneducated and/or ignorant individuals. I'm not one of the aforementioned individuals and that isn't my target audience. Hence, my perspective and tact of analysis.

Don't play to your audience, PM me or ask me directly.

[Esc0BosS]

audience??... smh, im sure all these dudes got spell check on they shit... and dont need you tryna (typo lol) undermine them by pulling out typos on pieces??... i mean, the point of that is what??... if you understand what dudes writing there is no need to pick out typos, because im sure most these people that do/dont do typos... more than likely actually know how to spell...

and if its an audio, then talk diction...dont try gettin smart with me

[Intellexual]

audience??... smh, im sure all these dudes got spell check on they shit... and dont need you tryna (typo lol) undermine them by pulling out typos on pieces??... i mean, the point of that is what??... if you understand what dudes writing there is no need to pick out typos, because im sure most these people that do/dont do typos... more than likely actually know how to spell...

and if its an audio, then talk diction...dont try gettin smart with me

It's demean rather than undermine. And, when recording, it's about enunciation. Diction is word choice, not the sound of the words. I see you still don't know the difference between a spelling mistake (which I don't regard, when providing feedback) and diction. That's fine.

Rather than debate something which you seem to not understand, let's get to the point. I provide constructive criticism and you ramble off egotistically (with your neva hate disclaimer). I don't quarrel with that because everyone presents their perspective uniquely. With that in mind, you have no good reason to be concerned with how I provide feedback.

I've never been intrigued by your Open Mic pieces enough to provide feedback (that I can recall) and I likely never will be. And, since you don't have me providing your feedback, move it on along. That's about it from me, you're welcome to make another showing of your ignorance and/or immaturity.

[Esc0BosS]

i install fear
It's instill, in case this wasn't a minor typo. Also, it's Muhammad or Mohammed. That latter can still be enunciated to rhyme as intended, though.
discrace my shit
Disgrace; same reason as above.

I like what you're thinking. Some of the punches were too obvious, but this is a strong practice type of piece.

oh dizzamn!!! ^ im missing out on some nerd feed...whats the biggy?... eh resume your geek activities

[country]

lmao maybe he installed fear like he installs car stereos


lmfao im jus kiddin

yo kid this shit was ealy simple n basic n only thing u can do is keep spittin