Im new here but have been writing for around a year
Here is one of my verses, im tryin to elevate so feedback is appreciated
Everyone's an illa killa, blood spilla, thrilla/
Words and fillas, so bland like vanilla/
You know Im judgin so bang that gavel ho/
my enemies are runnin and they sure know how to travel tho/
my multi-syllabicals, that clap you thru your clavical/
Everybodies hard, I do the most damage tho/
They felt they good, oh they thought so/
I see through they plots tho/
My hostile gospel/
Makes body builder rappers seem not so macho/
raps all about blocks and rocks hos/
Knockout flows make them see lots of spots tho/
Pause give them gauze to cover the flaws/
And it draws applause whenever i drop my jaws/
Like the classic shark/
or if we stickin with Speilberg Jurrasic Park/
cuz you know its dark/
And the beasts are loose/
throw more lightning than the priests of Zeus/
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