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Thread: Who Woulda Known?

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    Who Woulda Known?

    Well you know that you are through
    when Scarlett Red becomes an Ambious Blue
    And the tears you shed and blood you bled
    Disguise you through and through
    Who would have knew
    That with the room you had when you were bad
    you'd grow a tolerance to your bed

    Who would have knew
    who would have knew?

    As your aspiration grew your heavy heart weighed mighty
    And the spring in your step when you were pep
    Always puts up a fighting
    You were always quick as lightning
    With every breath you kept
    And every note you kept
    You had the carousel in your head

    Who would have knew
    who would have knew
    Who would have known

    That the life you love to loathe
    Has become a dream that you have blown
    And as every human grows
    This path is all you'll really ever know
    Who would have known?

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    Last edited by Pious; May 11th, 2008 at 03:52 AM

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    Re: Who Woulda Known?

    nice poem, the rhythm was especialy smooth, all seemed to be worded very nicely, - thus making this a most fluent piece
    all in all i reckon this was short and sharp effective poem
    the whole sound of it was just very smooth

    keep it up

    pz
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    Re: Who Woulda Known?

    nice poem, the rhythm was especialy smooth, all seemed to be worded very nicely, - thus making this a most fluent piece
    all in all i reckon this was short and sharp effective poem
    the whole sound of it was just very smooth

    keep it up

    pz
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