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May 13th, 2014, 07:19 AM
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Buzz Kill
Rotten Waste
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...Luminous-Curse
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...ftly-Ft-MsPush
Rotten Waste - Mic S
It began when my heart picked up pace.
My eyes sparked bright into my dark
past guiding me into space.
Blank - like the facial expression with-in.
When all the pain goes away
from the phene taking medicine again
While my blood pumps my lungs plugged
i can't breathe im heaving
my sleeping is now, ugh none
a buzz buzz im unfamiliar with
like when bees rush fussed
pissed off yet im lost in a wilderness
the reason i am in a transient stun
is imagine a tablet,
well it had one of my family dug.
the pain of a mad man
was quickly tested and measured
but i never lost temper
and the pain has been half patched.
I met a half that i love.
i said I Do! we grew
then we knew a baby was due
thats when i had my son
i bonded teaching him everyday
then on may twenty eigth
he was taken away
the half patched heart caved
it began when my heart picked up pace.
every faith and daily grace
made me what i am today,
a rotten waste.
edit** i tried to use more of an imagery concept rather than wordplay concept -so leave some feed and drop a link. if your feed is really short like "this was dope man. keep at it" or "this sucks quit rapping" then i wont rtf.
let me know what you think thanks.
Last edited by graf-x; May 13th, 2014 at 07:23 AM
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