(My original story) Sommer's Tragedy

Sommer's Tragedy

There was once a kingdom in a far away land. This land was prosperous and peaceful. It's citizens happy and content. This kingdom's name was Sommer.
But like every kingdom it had it's dark secrets. See, the king was also a wizard. An old wizard who was surrounded by many books and who knew many magical spells. His age was a mystery. He was old no doubt. But HOW old, no one in the entire kingdom actually knew. The king's name was "Averah."
King Averah had a queen. Although this queen was beautiful, she also had a very strong character. She was good in combat, horse riding, she was skilled in diplomacy and the people of the kingdom loved her so much. The queen's name was... "Herah."
One day King Averah decided to use magic to create servants. Now these servants were a new creation and the kingdom had never seen anything like them. Some citizens feared the new servants saying one day they will be overpowered by them. Others were less fearful but wanted the king to be more cautious when dealing with the servants.
By now you have heard of the story of Adam and Eve and also of the Tree of good and evil and of life. Well, you see, in this version of my story, king Averah was the one who made them as servants. He put them in a beautiful, peaceful garden and told them what to do and what not to do.
Now, the queen, Herah, did not like this. She thought it wasn't right so she and her son, whose name was "Loki," plotted against the king. Loki was also a shape shifter, and the queen, Herah, had him shape shift into a serpant and sneak into the garden. That is why he shape shifted into a serpant, because he had to be stealthy.

This is just a sample, just a little sample. To be continued...