They Kno Me!

Rappers coast to coast, kno im better than most/
I leave'em frantic like titanic when they sunk like the boat/
I catch MCs by the throat, just to provoke battle/
then line'em up, waitin for there turn like slaughter house cattle/
I hear ur rattle, but I have yet feel visious bite/
step up to the MIC and get ripped like helpless girls at night/
scared to fight or scared to have ur head, end up on a pike/
Detached from ur spine, wut once was urs is now considered mine/
like ur limelight, formed into ur outcast due to my rhymes/
I climb, my ladder of success escaping the rest/
of these comercial motha fuckas which whom i deeply detest/
confess that ya'll are fake cuz ya'll could never contest/
My raps so clean u'd think it was manufactured by zest/
Im the best! so get it thru ur head before theres a mess/
and get shot more times, then a conferance held by the press/
to find ur body they gon' need to call 1 800 collect/
respect...i earn it any way that i can/
and if i cant i just take it and leave u screamin dammit man/

a few decent lines..... alot of played plains..... topic... blah done and done and done ....... then done again......... not completely horrible but still BLAh... nothing great...


PS... read the fuckin rules moron or this will get closed

..This was real basic & weak...the lines you used were just fillers....elevate homie...

You need 2 links to 2 open mics you've left decent feedback on or this will be closed. Read the thread at the top of the forum if you don't know how. If you up this again without links it will be closed.

that was cool homie
but olny like the middle was tight
the rest was kinda sloppy to me
but you should try to work on your flow homie
but overall it was good job
7/10